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  • #21
    The last word breaks the rhyme cycle, tsk tsk tsk.

    Hehe, it's better than me though. I got nothing. :shock:

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    • #22
      OK kids, I'm giving it a shot...this is the 2nd poem I've ever written, but you HARSH CRITICS (be gentle) only get this one because allmighty Anonymouse made it perfectly clear that we can't talk about "xxxx like flowers". Anyway, keep in mind that I'm a beginner and I just now wrote it at 2am, so some of it might not click right. Don't laugh, please?


      The Cycle

      Born into this life alone
      This simple cycle we were never shown
      For every person that was delivered to earth
      Was certain to experience a lonely birth

      From day 1 to infancy
      I am giddy as can be
      With head as smooth as “baby butt skin”
      Nasty treasures wrapped up with a safety pin

      Crawling as a little bug
      I begin to explore this dirty rug
      For being a toddler spells out trouble
      The accidents that happen most likely double

      On I go toward increased mobility
      As my legs show me their availability
      Learning to speak as a child
      Will influence my future as it’s filed

      Exploration hits me as a teen
      Early bloomers sure can be mean
      I remember the first time I tried pot
      And banged that girl I liked a lot

      Life is awesome with chicks and beer
      But the homework I do fear
      For young adulthood has brought me to college
      In hopes that I don’t bring my future the damage

      With career in hand, I go out to find a wife
      So we can multiply and create some life
      Being an adult has its share of bad relationships
      But watching your kids grow eliminates the hardships

      The biggest bummer if I had to pick
      Is that Viagra no longer does the trick
      As an elder, bald again, I’m prone to rants
      And well, you guessed it, I xxxx in my pants

      Life is such a silly yet powerful thing
      And its value is worth more than cha-ching $$$
      For in the end there’s no need to weep
      As I comfortably go to permanent sleep


      ...AND FOR ANYONE THAT'S SLOW, YES, I DID WRITE IT FROM A MAN'S POINT OF VIEW (IT WAS EASIER FOR THE RHYMING). :P

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      • #23
        wow... not bad at all Flames...
        I don't think you could say that you're a beginner anymore!!

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        • #24
          BRAVO FLAMES. JOB WELL DONE I LOV IT!
          Achkerov kute.

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          • #25
            Hehe, thanks buddy. I don't feel that bad anymore.

            Oh, and I didn't have a chance to compliment your work...I really enjoyed the one you wrote.

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            • #26
              My last post was meant for Jahannam, but thanks to you to, Mr. Amouse. :P

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              • #27
                The truth hurts, hehe.

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                • #28
                  hehe.. nice poem anon... I'd title it SURFERBUSHIAN

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                  • #29
                    heyy, I like this thread, very creative people!

                    and Jahnaam, I really liked yours, and how you included everyone in it.

                    so im giving it a try, so here it goes.

                    Nietzsche

                    I read about the “overman”
                    and of Friedrich Nietzsche I became a fan.

                    His extreme candor is often invigorating,
                    as his words are all, so illuminating.

                    Thus Spoke Zarathustra was the book
                    and the subject grabbed me like a hook

                    Now I ask to those who read
                    what you thought of dear Fred.

                    lol.

                    ok, that’s pretty bad, but ya, to those who read it, or any other books by Nietzsche, what do you guys think about him?

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                    • #30
                      Very well spiral.

                      I think the problem most people have is fear of what other person thinks of their poetry skills.

                      Let it all go and start to flow. It'll just come naturally as you start to express yourself lyrically.
                      Achkerov kute.

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