Just in case, you know, you care at all

[One-Way]

Re: Just in case, you know, you care at all

I'm up to two viewers.

[iFemale]

Re: Just in case, you know, you care at all

I bet you'd get more if you'd write about Pepsi.

[One-Way]

Re: Just in case, you know, you care at all

I really rather not.

[iFemale]

Re: Just in case, you know, you care at all

At least write about the company.

[One-Way]

Re: Just in case, you know, you care at all

Unless there is a film made about Pepsi (the company), I will refrain from writing about Pepsi (the company).

[iFemale]

Re: Just in case, you know, you care at all

How about Pepsi in a film?

[One-Way]

Re: Just in case, you know, you care at all

No.

We're ruining my self-promotion thread. Does anybody like the blog? Seriously.

[iFemale]

Re: Just in case, you know, you care at all

I do. Seriously.

[iFemale]

Re: Just in case, you know, you care at all

No.

We're ruining my self-promotion thread. Does anybody like the blog? Seriously.

Ok. Here are my thoughts on your blog. I noticed that it was very organized, so good job there, especially your favorites section on the right I thought was interesting. However, I felt as if most of it, you were writing a school paper with mandatory guidelines. You should loosen up a bit and maybe add some humor? Make it more exciting for your crowd like you do here in the forums. Liven it up jus' a lil' bit.

[One-Way]

Re: Just in case, you know, you care at all

Ok. Here are my thoughts on your blog. I noticed that it was very organized, so good job there, especially your favorites section on the right I thought was interesting. However, I felt as if most of it, you were writing a school paper with mandatory guidelines. You should loosen up a bit and maybe add some humor? Make it more exciting for your crowd like you do here in the forums. Liven it up jus' a lil' bit.

Well, I don't want to loosen up so much, but I will try to make it seem less tense. It's a matter of finding my own voice and discovering just how my approach will be when it comes to writing. While I can easily communicate much more with a younger crowd (like my cousins who read them occasionally), I don't want to fall into the behavior of writing in that specific way. I still want to make it seem like I'm writing professionally, as I would if I was given a position to write for a magazine/newspaper.