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  • this is a rock song i had written back when i was in a rock band.... 1999-2000ish.

    The End of the World

    Come see my guns and my cellular phones.
    My sons can fly they rule the battle zones.
    There lives a little man who causes me fear
    Because he’s waiting for the End of the World…

    Waiting for the End of the World…

    Ask for forgiveness, get a golden ring.
    Ask for the help of Jesus, where in hell have you been?
    Ask for me tomorrow and you’ll find a different man.
    I’ll be waiting for the End of the World…

    Waiting for the End of the World…

    Is there forgiveness for those who lie?
    Is there happiness for those who cry?
    Is there life for those who die?
    No reply… You get no reply!…

    The cities of the world bear the flying colours of their own.
    “Long live the king!” sitting, blind, upon his throne.
    But the tears in my eyes could be the tears in yours
    When you’re waiting for the End of the World…

    Waiting for the End of the World…

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    • Word weaver words.

      Spin your fantasies around me word weaver.
      Seduce my mind with a subtle rhyme.
      Tangle me in twists and turns on each page,
      To lure my heart into your space and time.

      For words hold the key to unlock my soul.
      To unfetter my spirit and set it flying free.
      Reveal your thoughts upon the naked page,
      And through their spell, entice me, capture me.
      The test of a first-rate intelligence is the ability to hold two opposing ideas in mind at the same time and still retain the ability to function. -- F. Scott Fitzgerald

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      • Originally posted by ckBejug
        Word weaver words.

        Spin your fantasies around me word weaver.
        Seduce my mind with a subtle rhyme.
        Tangle me in twists and turns on each page,
        To lure my heart into your space and time.

        For words hold the key to unlock my soul.
        To unfetter my spirit and set it flying free.
        Reveal your thoughts upon the naked page,
        And through their spell, entice me, capture me.

        that was nice. i enjoyed that very much, bejug

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        • Originally posted by ckBejug
          Word weaver words.

          Spin your fantasies around me word weaver.
          Seduce my mind with a subtle rhyme.
          Tangle me in twists and turns on each page,
          To lure my heart into your space and time.

          For words hold the key to unlock my soul.
          To unfetter my spirit and set it flying free.
          Reveal your thoughts upon the naked page,
          And through their spell, entice me, capture me.
          Very good poem. Nice use of words.
          Achkerov kute.

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          • Years

            Please don’t come and leave once again,
            For I haven’t had the chance to begin.
            You come so hastily and with such grace
            But take along only time without a pace.
            All that remains from you are lines,
            Imprinted as wrinkles upon my face
            Burned in as images in photographs
            Spilled upon like ink on a writer’s first draft
            Instilled as deep grooves into my heart
            And captured as a smile, a kiss in my memories.
            Precious are these, the feelings, the glee
            The memories that are treasures, so dear to me.
            Yet you decide to revisit once more,
            Completing your mission, your frivolous chore.
            But this time more ruthless than ever before.
            Endowing more pain, taking what’s left
            My soul filled with treasures, before your theft.
            Taking all, you leave one last breath,
            Which I take in, knowing I have nothing else left…

            By: Me again

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            • This might be a diffrent format...I got some spare time though, I'll give it a try. Its not gonna be poetry though...more of a hiphop type flow.


              You don't understand...I got more rhymes then a hand full of sand
              Verbal terms tryin to Expand...I can't hold my "heavy" rhymes hand in hand
              This is not poetry...Nursery Rhyming to me Is like an Ancient Study
              You can't can't "outbeat" me, it be Like tryin to "Suck" on A latex Candy
              Im tryin to kick knowlege...Maybe Some of Ya'll Smart Enough to Acknowledge
              Some say its hard to rhyme "Orange"...Here you go man, Its not a Challenge
              Look, I can go on and on, maybe rhmye this till the Brake of Dawn
              4 Am, And I'm still jumpin bars like a Rook Over Pawn, or the Hook on this Line

              This took me about 5-10 minutes. Give feeback on it, I mgiht do some more.
              Last edited by MadHandle; 08-07-2004, 12:25 AM.

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              • I don't like it.

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                • OUCH! I have a feeling he might not "...do some more." lol.
                  I see...

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                  • It's been a while since someone wrote a poem.
                    Achkerov kute.

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                    • eek i have so many new ones but theyre too personal to post them- im so hesitant abotu posting my poems here...

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