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  • (one of my best loved poems! and i first read it on the net back in 98!)

    Flower Among the Weeds--Hal Gantt

    I'm glad I met you on life's rocky road
    while gathering weeds grown from seeds I sowed
    I pulled and I pulled till I thought I would drop
    I must have had help when i planted that crop.

    I had to keep searching thru these useless plants
    If I looked long enough, I might find, perchance
    the seed I'd been saving, but somehow had lost
    It must have been mixed with the seeds I tossed.

    I picked some wild roses down life's winding way
    I remember their fragrance, still to this day
    they withered and died, with my dreams and plans
    and left me with nothing but thorns in my hands.

    I knew my one flower was growing somewhere
    and I knew no other could ever compare
    I'd search and I'd search for all I was worth
    If I had to pull every weed on this earth.

    The very first time I laid eyes on thee
    I'd have to be blind, if I couldn't see
    what, now on my mind, is forever engraved
    You're the flower that grew from that seed I saved.

    Now that we've met, from the search I resign
    to devote all my life to making you mine
    for I didn't find you, 'cause you weren't lost
    and I merely can say, now our paths have crossed.

    The words, "make you mine," poor choice, I suppose
    'cause I can't pick you, like I'd pick a rose
    but I'm truly hoping, I've found indeed,
    my flower who'll grow with this lonely weed.

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    • A sacrafice to pay the toll

      A final bath, to cleanse my soul…
      a sacrifice to pay the toll…

      I lock the door and turn the tap…
      fill the tub up to it’s cap…

      I put in one foot, and then two…
      offer one last prayer to you know who...

      I take a breath and carve my flesh…
      Drop my arms into the depths…

      When it is all is said and done…
      over the edge, my blood shall run…

      A final bath, to cleanse my soul…
      a sacrifice to pay the toll…
      "All I know is I'm not a Marxist." -Karl Marx

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      • Waiting for Cremation

        The stench of ash inches inward to my lungs.
        Blackdust lingers in the corner,
        knowingly out of reach of peripheral vision.
        The pump of the chest since ceased,
        I nonetheless willfully listen, listen.
        My body temperature drops as
        the air temperature rises
        and a man in a surgical mask calls out
        over the crackle of organic fire;
        everything is mumbling.
        I want to sweat, to stress
        but the adrenal gland isn't responding.
        Memories of lunchtime tales
        of aztecs and volcanoes linger,
        creeping to the forefront
        of a disconnected mind;
        wondering if the fire in the chimney
        really is mine;
        wondering if it really is my time.

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        • How can things change so quickly?
          What was it that I could not see?

          I died and came back for you…
          Reconfigured my soul anew…

          How can so few words do so much damage?
          ruin every bit of beauty I ever saw within your visage?

          All my dreams and hopes, shot down by a single silly ideal...
          how can you believe such idiocy with so much blinded zeal?

          I want to cry, I want to die, and take you with me too…
          But I calm myself and take a breath…

          Eh… who needs a b!tch like you.
          "All I know is I'm not a Marxist." -Karl Marx

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          • man you guys wrote really good poems here's one i wrote:


            A moving soul is hard to talk about
            So I stand up and march about.

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            • Wow, 21 pages so quickly, I'd like to try to make one in English,...baaaah If you guys could understand french it would be THAT easier.

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              • I did it!! But the way the story was told isn't exactly mine, I have seen this before but don't remember where. You'll have to read the whole poem first


                Another other day

                Once again he caught the train
                that left everyday for work
                Once again he ate his lunch
                sandwiches, and hold the onion
                that his wife prepared daily
                Once again he soldered
                Once again he hammered
                Once again he sweated buckets
                and smoked behind the generator
                between the gas cylinders...
                Once again he saw his work
                completed, and once again
                he returned home to a loving family
                with kids and a wife and a dog
                Once again he slept on the cold
                hard couch, uncer measly blankets
                because his loving wife totally ignored him
                But not once did his paycheck arrive
                or his Boss note his prescence at
                the construction site,

                Don't blame them Ted,
                can you see the dead?



                Voila

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                • Originally posted by !EEK
                  I did it!! But the way the story was told isn't exactly mine, I have seen this before but don't remember where. You'll have to read the whole poem first


                  Another other day

                  Once again he caught the train
                  that left everyday for work
                  Once again he ate his lunch
                  sandwiches, and hold the onion
                  that his wife prepared daily
                  Once again he soldered
                  Once again he hammered
                  Once again he sweated buckets
                  and smoked behind the generator
                  between the gas cylinders...
                  Once again he saw his work
                  completed, and once again
                  he returned home to a loving family
                  with kids and a wife and a dog
                  Once again he slept on the cold
                  hard couch, uncer measly blankets
                  because his loving wife totally ignored him
                  But not once did his paycheck arrive
                  or his Boss note his prescence at
                  the construction site,

                  Don't blame them Ted,
                  can you see the dead?



                  Voila

                  Did you write the poem or you copied it from somewhere?

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                  • Originally posted by Emil
                    Did you write the poem or you copied it from somewhere?

                    The copy was original Emile...It's just a teaser till I write my real poem.

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                    • uff i miss writing poems-- im in the mood for some deep dark poetry right about now-- damn nyquil heps my writers block

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