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  • Okay...so here is one of mine........


    In this life, this hole we bleed and breathe
    Next door we’ve have been cursed to be
    In this life I have never been known to understand happiness.
    I have never known, so to have never been forgotten.

    Now and here you laugh and leap as a five-year-old child, with no cares to keep.
    But you have never been in this world.
    You have not seen my family weep.
    My world my culture raises and dies and you laugh and leap as the five-year-old child.

    In this life, this hole we live and breed.
    Next door you’re have cursed to be
    But is this my life my own.
    To which I should find happiness
    To which I shell never truly been known.

    Built on only chance this life we choose to live, to take.
    But next door I have been cursed to die, in this life, this hole of mine, which I have laughed and cried.

    This path I walk, this one here, let me bravely tread when you will only fear.
    Cause all you do it laugh and leap as the five-year-old child with no cares to keep.
    You can't hold a man down without staying down with him.

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    • Forgiveness

      I have been bad since a lad
      In a dreamy Armenian homeland of the past
      Tearing the curtain to satisfy the want
      Putting a match in the outlet
      Burning down the curtains
      Electrocuting myself
      As a child causing havoc for my parents
      Who art so patient
      My dear brother
      I am sorry, for scratching you
      We’ve spent a lifetime circling each other
      On the canvas in the paints shadow
      I have not listened wisely
      I have been bad so bad
      My mind made of sand slipping thought and action
      Into my self made fiction of lost convictions
      As I grew in size my mind ceased to be wise
      I have instead taken strides in latitudes of lies
      Thinking I was escaping my
      Hemispheres of fears
      I don’t remember too much of anything
      Of these voyages into the seas of nothing
      Only after did I remember
      Anything I could have hoped to say
      Where did thy mind go prancing far
      And off and low
      Shedding tears it could not fake
      For ages passed it formed a lake
      No, wit doesn’t matter
      This is my imperfection
      This is my soul’s transmutation
      I never intended it to lead to this
      It took some years and few bruises to notice
      That I was lying in dirt
      Soiled I sit, my jeans still fit
      With my eyes outlining the veins that ride my skin
      In silence the blood flowing
      Following a path toward my heart
      A train of peaceful punctures
      Riding merrily down in a timeless exercise
      Of what once was the arm, beginning of my name
      Which I used to swim in the seas of nothing
      Because I was so bad living for myself
      Walking heedless paths into diversion
      Never thought of reconnection
      To my soul, my driving force
      And thy brain all lost and weary
      Could not find a path that’s worthy
      And here is where I
      Sigh...
      Sit, lost in a lie
      Clenched tight and I
      Couldn’t console myself because I needed the family
      My family
      And now I know not to bring for more misery
      Tonight I offer this apology
      Please forgive me, dear family
      That watered my roots with your eternal eyes
      Healed my hearts wounds with your silky smiles
      Altered my blood flow to change my heart beat
      Acted as my inner ammo to keep my soul sweet
      And this is my biography
      Of apology
      Of the lengths that I have gone to
      To escape me

      Achkerov kute.

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      • Here's an old one.

        Pact With The Devil

        What about him is so appealing to thine eye,
        that raps around our bodies holding tight
        and swindles our soul into a lie,
        Pulling us towards him, away from the light?...

        We take comfort in its discourse
        that lifts all burdens off of our shoulders
        leaving us to feel no remorse
        over sins and appalling actions we take towards others.

        It's hypnotic voice, fills our mind
        whirling, swirling, into such convincing shapes
        until we are left blind,
        drowning in the devil's gapes.













        Yes, I know about thine

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        • Witness

          Within her eyes lies a key,
          bearing witness to fallen nations.
          A revelation of needed peace,
          within the saviours disturbed creation.

          Saddned and dismayed,
          fault upon the shoulders of mankind,
          peace and prosperity devoured upon devils parade...
          a feast mircacously divine.

          Within her eyes growing wild,
          witnessing the continues fight,
          a sliver of pain
          from that of a wounded child,
          cursed burden upon hope that took flight.

          And yet hope remains,
          shinning strong-non defiled
          a soul longing for unity,
          like that of innocent thoughts of love reconcield,
          within her eyes growing lies a key,
          in the nights calling,
          in the heart of a child.





          ------I have to say that I am very very impressed with the poetry you all have posted on here.VERY well done.

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          • That's some good poetry by ya'll. Keep the talent flowing.
            Achkerov kute.

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            • if i were to ever write poetry again, i would maybe read it to a close friend or two; i would feel too naked sharing it with the whole world; whatever works for the rest of you; actually i used to love poetry, i used to love sitting there and become all emotional and 'feel' the words and thoughts (and if i humbly may say so they were pretty good) but i figured it's not worth it!! putting myself through all that emotional drainage and pain just to get a few words on paper; so i got wiser and tried to focus on happiness; i realize not all are that way, but that is how i am...was.

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              • I know what you mean. But I'm just gone post and not think about it. And the best thing is you get feedback, so you can either make it better or write something better in the future.





                The narrow fingers running through the Perseid meteor
                The velvet sky turns to night as his sweetness turns to dusk
                You find things fuzzy between the two lovers.
                They close each other’s eyes to understand one another.
                Now only the left eye is covered then the right
                But what difference does it make?
                For they are both blind

                His narrow fingers run through as their fidelity bleeds into infatuations.
                His passion seems like obsession in her eyes.
                While she covers the left eye all come clean
                She has found herself as obsessed and lonely as he.

                There is a blister between the two souls.
                Both lovers past and present seem no way to find each other.
                She whispers her anesthetic “it’s all but love”
                But he is all too familiar with the semiotic.
                His signals run as his soul turns to stone
                As though, as though his love never reached her soul.

                There are no more whispers of promises of ‘when’ or ‘where’
                There is only silence.

                Tender hemlocks, roaring with its loud voice
                The velvet sky becomes gray as stone
                And earth between their legs are not dancing a soft ballet
                And there is nothing, not even a promise for tomorrow
                For mother earth has given her hand to only one lover, so He can walk the lonesome road for all his life and ever.
                You can't hold a man down without staying down with him.

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                • Lost on the water
                  Drifting across the seascape
                  Searching for a home
                  I will morph and reshape
                  Into a force
                  Into a wave
                  Turn to surf
                  I will misbehave
                  Into the eye of the storm
                  Where the truth awaits
                  The truth was
                  That I was
                  A lock
                  With a combination
                  a million left turns stopping at L
                  click
                  two million right turns to O
                  then three million left turns to V
                  another thick click
                  A last turn to the left stopping at E
                  open
                  She guessed it right
                  And with that final click
                  My soul blossomed
                  Like a wildflower
                  And tears rushed
                  Flooded my eyelids
                  I drowned in love
                  Freedom, love forbids
                  Pain it welcomes
                  In a thousand painful memories

                  Last edited by Anonymouse; 08-27-2004, 03:56 PM.
                  Achkerov kute.

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                  • You neither can nor should understand what it means.
                    Just listen, it comes without note.
                    It cannot be found in money or in wealth.
                    And there is nothing in it to comfort you

                    Close your eyes and yawn. All will be over soon.
                    You will forget the poem
                    It has forgotten you. And it does not matter.
                    It has been most beautiful in its erasures.
                    You can't hold a man down without staying down with him.

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                    • Originally posted by Anonymouse
                      Lost on the water
                      Drifting across the seascape
                      Searching for a home
                      I will morph and reshape
                      Into a force
                      Into a wave
                      Turn to surf
                      I will misbehave
                      Into the eye of the storm
                      Where the truth awaits
                      The truth was
                      That I was
                      A lock
                      With a combination
                      a million left turns stopping at L
                      click
                      two million right turns to O
                      then three million left turns to V
                      another thick click
                      A last turn to the left stopping at E
                      open
                      She guessed it right
                      And with that final click
                      My soul blossomed
                      Like a wildflower
                      And tears rushed
                      Flooded my eyelids
                      I drowned in love
                      Freedom, love forbids
                      Pain it welcomes
                      In a thousand painful memories


                      That was beautiful Anon. It makes me what to fall in love.
                      You can't hold a man down without staying down with him.

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