Poetry Corner

[Thai-Samurai]

i thoguht of a poem slash rap:

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[Thai-Samurai]

When I rap I try get my words to rhyme,
But it's hard inside a white mind!!
OOH!!!

[!EEK]

When I rap I try get my words to rhyme,
But it's hard inside a white mind!!
OOH!!!

Every day and every night

I rock out with my mind

It's xxxxed up but it's alright

I'm going to Disney Land!

(sing with the "I wanna bang bang bang , etc..no relationship" rythme)

[HyeJinx1984]

LoL, you just know this is gonna turn into a "rap" thread now...

[!EEK]

LoL, you just know this is gonna turn into a "rap" thread now...

Yes, you're right, lets make it a "Drama-queen poetry" thread!!

Let me start:

Life's gloom is feeding

Hell risen, I fall apart

Death's sorrow is growing

Father, Bring me to K Mart (need some Oreo 's)

[Thai-Samurai]

I just thought of this one.

My mind is
pinned down.
So I am reluctant to get up
and move around.

[!EEK]

Soft moon rises in the sky
meets the sun and scares him dry
fireball round he goes
Where he flees, no one knows

*sing with a kid's melody tone

[Thai-Samurai]

Soft moon rises in the sky
meets the sun and scares him dry
fireball round he goes
Where he flees, no one knows

*sing with a kid's melody tone

I like that one it's cool

[obi]

for Irina...

I did not know she was my soul, my heart, my life, my world untold...
I picture her inside my mind, i knew one day her heart i'd find...
I breath her scent and touch her skin, two minds have never been so akin...
now when i dream my head will twirl, so tender, sweet Armenian girl.

[!EEK]

I like that one it's cool

thanks, now I'm gonna make one in french......the fun part is that anything I say in french would be "poetical" Here I go:

Pour seul réel couverture,
Un voil d'ambre m'embrasse
là ou les hommes vainquent, je trépasse
Seul, ton reflet se pose sur mon armure

Tel une seconde peau
je te brandis, fier
on sera la lumiere d'en haut
ici, ou le brouillard se reflete dans l'eau

Ne quitte pas mes blessures,
la main d'un medecin n'y peut rien
j'ais subis une morssure
fatale et dure

Sauve moi d'en bas,
ramenne moi en haut
là ou l'épée sert de bouclier,La guerre sauve des gens
Là ou le mal est lié