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  • messiah33
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    some idea tp poem ur song call how ever you want

    we live fore fredom
    but we dont what it all about
    some times it evil and some
    times it not
    pathetic and loser that is our
    human nature

    give it back to the people
    back to the pramtive
    you got to fight
    withe you own

    you should take all this
    and start to belive
    tow genocid in 30 years
    its our fuсking nature
    to kill each other
    its our nature to xxxx one another

    give it back to the people
    back to the pramtive
    you got to fight
    withe you own

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  • Siamanto
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    Originally posted by Anonymouse
    However nobody tries to rhyme
    Because their words and minds are not sublime
    Some people are just too horny
    Why should poetry rhyme?
    Isn't aligning words a crime?
    Arranged, such prisoners of war,
    In rows of two or more.

    Liberez les sardines!
    Last edited by Siamanto; 03-15-2005, 07:36 PM.

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  • SxyDon
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    Originally posted by Thai-Samurai
    If Intro to Psych taught me anything; I suggest you build a giant bonfire, then cut off a lock of your hair and burn it. Then shout allah three times in a row, and your psyche should evolve at breakneck speeds.
    +

    Are you on crack ?

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  • Thai-Samurai
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    Originally posted by SxyDon
    as i stare into the dark
    i can feel the coldness inside
    i see a small candle tinkering in the dark
    trying to become a strong flame again
    but the cold wind keeps blowing it down
    the flame is determined but cannot shine any brighter
    cannot give anymore light then it has
    you can see that the wick is almost all gone
    its done what it did and is ready to burn out
    it knows it will never shine so bright as it had some time ago
    its so sad that we will not see the bright shine of that flame anymore
    but as time passes we will forget and get used to the dim lights provided by the other candles


    Please comment
    If Intro to Psych taught me anything; I suggest you build a giant bonfire, then cut off a lock of your hair and burn it. Then shout allah three times in a row, and your psyche should evolve at breakneck speeds.

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  • SxyDon
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    My Poem

    as i stare into the dark
    i can feel the coldness inside
    i see a small candle tinkering in the dark
    trying to become a strong flame again
    but the cold wind keeps blowing it down
    the flame is determined but cannot shine any brighter
    cannot give anymore light then it has
    you can see that the wick is almost all gone
    its done what it did and is ready to burn out
    it knows it will never shine so bright as it had some time ago
    its so sad that we will not see the bright shine of that flame anymore
    but as time passes we will forget and get used to the dim lights provided by the other candles


    Please comment

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  • obi
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    Originally posted by Baron Dants
    I choose not to. Because the last time I explained something Armenian for your sake (my duped joke), you turned it against me.

    And I just didn't appreciate that.

    HA!

    Fair play, but you was making fun of me.

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  • Anonymouse
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    The moon shined upon my window sill
    As I shut my eyes, my lips and ears
    There I lay my body sleeping my mind was leaping
    like Tarzan swinging
    I watched the silent sagas of my dreams
    Walked for miles on autumn leaves
    I swam in lakes made of tears
    Across the furrowed land of fears
    Where memories had been nothing more
    Than forgotten fields of ancient lore
    Only then to be washed ashore
    Where I faced the silent scarecrow of my shadow
    Escaped with a magic carpet powered by the summer breeze
    I met nouns, adjectives, adverbs in memories
    Danced together through the streets like drunken gypsies
    So many things tied to the past
    With chains, square-dancing together at last
    With nowhere to hide and nowhere to go
    Like birds hunting worms in fields of snow
    Untied to the present and unknown to the future
    Dreaming, like a scientist creating nuclear confusion
    I placed my hands at the mouth of March
    From lunch lines, kickball, handball and hopscotch
    Elementary school volleyball hit my crotch
    Single file line to get lunch
    But I was dreaming all the while
    Of another life a mile
    In the memories of Emerald Isle
    Of a rendezvous of questions and answers
    A midnight meeting under the streetlight
    By the Mafia of my mind
    Between what is known and forgotten
    The sexual act between what is sought and remembered
    And the birth of a life history unscathed yet endangered
    Making its way from the past to the present
    In one motion-like crescent to my mind
    Under the moon of the present which shines like it’s pregnant
    still on my window sill.

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  • xBaron Dants
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    Originally posted by obi
    please d00d,

    The others that know Armenian know what it says...

    OK, errrrm, could YOU translate YOUR words FOR me???

    Not direct them to me in a way that is with personal meaning. Purely literal and language thing.
    I choose not to. Because the last time I explained something Armenian for your sake (my duped joke), you turned it against me.

    And I just didn't appreciate that.

    HA!

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  • Anonymouse
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    These are all good poems for us internet sages to poem through the pages
    Since I've been counting rain drops that flop against my forehead
    And trying to strike the right sound beat with my Tourette's Syndrome to then have a tune and when combined with the rain drops and my syndrome they will be a symphony of the weird playing a concerto of the unknown
    Last edited by Anonymouse; 12-29-2004, 02:09 AM.

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  • obi
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    Originally posted by Baron Dants
    lol, no. It was for !eek and !eek only!

    Now if YOU want us to translate something, that's another story..

    please d00d,

    The others that know Armenian know what it says...

    OK, errrrm, could YOU translate YOUR words FOR me???

    Not direct them to me in a way that is with personal meaning. Purely literal and language thing.

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