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  • ardenik
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    Originally posted by ckBejug
    Word weaver words.

    Spin your fantasies around me word weaver.
    Seduce my mind with a subtle rhyme.
    Tangle me in twists and turns on each page,
    To lure my heart into your space and time.

    For words hold the key to unlock my soul.
    To unfetter my spirit and set it flying free.
    Reveal your thoughts upon the naked page,
    And through their spell, entice me, capture me.

    that was nice. i enjoyed that very much, bejug

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  • ckBejug
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    Word weaver words.

    Spin your fantasies around me word weaver.
    Seduce my mind with a subtle rhyme.
    Tangle me in twists and turns on each page,
    To lure my heart into your space and time.

    For words hold the key to unlock my soul.
    To unfetter my spirit and set it flying free.
    Reveal your thoughts upon the naked page,
    And through their spell, entice me, capture me.

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  • ardenik
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    this is a rock song i had written back when i was in a rock band.... 1999-2000ish.

    The End of the World

    Come see my guns and my cellular phones.
    My sons can fly they rule the battle zones.
    There lives a little man who causes me fear
    Because he’s waiting for the End of the World…

    Waiting for the End of the World…

    Ask for forgiveness, get a golden ring.
    Ask for the help of Jesus, where in hell have you been?
    Ask for me tomorrow and you’ll find a different man.
    I’ll be waiting for the End of the World…

    Waiting for the End of the World…

    Is there forgiveness for those who lie?
    Is there happiness for those who cry?
    Is there life for those who die?
    No reply… You get no reply!…

    The cities of the world bear the flying colours of their own.
    “Long live the king!” sitting, blind, upon his throne.
    But the tears in my eyes could be the tears in yours
    When you’re waiting for the End of the World…

    Waiting for the End of the World…

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  • Tres Bien
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    What a nice poem arden. And whaaaaaaaaat a girl she must have been!

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  • ardenik
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    Originally posted by spiral
    You wanted a lot of things....
    yea i did... lol i told u it was gonna be cheesy!
    i dont want so many things anymore.. just to be happy & im doing alright with that at the moment

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  • angelik22
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    boy was i wrong about that one... lol i should've ran away!

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  • Anonymouse
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    Originally posted by spiral
    You wanted a lot of things....
    The most beautiful poem EVAR!

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  • loseyourname
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    I wish I was a neutron bomb, for once I could go off . . .

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  • spiral
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    You wanted a lot of things....

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  • ardenik
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    ive said the stupidest, cheesiest things when i was 16.... lol

    I want you.
    I want to see you.
    I want to touch you.
    I want to feel you.
    I want to have you & hold you.
    I want to hug & kiss you.
    I want to be with you forever…

    I want to spend eternity
    Watching you sleep,
    Drying your cheeks
    When you weep,
    Staring into your eyes,
    Into the endless deep,
    Giving away my heart
    For only you to keep.

    I want to be the one
    To bring you flowers,
    To talk with you for hours,
    To dance with you to a song of silence
    And then call it ours.

    I want to pick roses for you.
    I want to draw portraits of you.
    I want to have a picture of you on my piano
    And compose love songs for you.
    I want to spend my days
    Writing love poems for you.
    I want to dream of you at night
    And when I awake,
    I want the first thing I see to be you.

    I want to imagine with you.
    I want to enjoy the miracle of life with you,
    Admire the beauty of art with you.
    I want to melt an ice sculpture,
    Call it art
    And rename it after you.

    I want to treat you
    Like the princess that you are,
    Like the angel that you are.
    I want to spend my every idle moment
    Serenading you with my guitar.

    I want to show you love,
    I want to be your man.
    I want to walk the world
    While I’m holding your hand.

    I want to sing you a song.
    I want you to sing along.
    I want the lyric to be strong,
    But the harmonies, all wrong.
    I want to teach you the melody
    And I want you to sing it with me.
    And if ever you were to sing off-key,
    I want to assure you that it’s only me.

    I want to share my love with you
    And forget my pain with you.
    I want to go insane with you.
    I want to run naked in the rain with you.
    I want to fly away to Spain with you,
    Dance the Flamenco with you,
    Fight bulls & win… for you.

    Ever since I last saw you,
    I’ve been spellbound.
    I want to give my life
    Never to see you frown.
    When we’ll be together,
    I want our sorrows to be drowned.
    I want to love you so much
    That I would cry when you’re not around.

    I want you to see
    What you mean to me.
    How I adore you,
    It’s almost blasphemy!
    You are my fantasy,
    You are my ecstasy,
    You are my destiny
    And I want you
    To be everything to me…


    -arden, 1999

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