Poetry Corner

[HyeJinx1984]

Great, now you got me thinking of all my old crushes and "almost coulda beens"... *le sigh*

Seriously though, nice little poem.

[sad_eyes]

I think its quite good. Actually, it makes me remember an ex of mine. Bravo!

[SxyDon]

A Poem From The Heart - Please post opinions

As I sit here
And think to myself
Do you think of me?
Do you still want me?
Do you still love me?
It burns me inside to think you’re with someone else
It burns me inside to just think you’re not mine
I look around me
Trying to find how to get these feelings
How to get these thoughts out of my mind
I feel so lonely
I feel so depressed
Without you I feel empty
What can I do to reverse time?
To undo the things that got me feeling and thinking this way
Tell me
Do you still think of me?

[angelik22]

o no i likie- i write alott of poems also- just havent been able to have some time to write more lately...

[thedebutante]

wow awesome... !!

If this is about my poem, then I thank you very much. I just wrote it and my writing is a bit rusty now. (So it means a lot!)

[angelik22]

wow awesome... !!

[thedebutante]

Pact

Chronic undertones prevail
Yet are quick to diverge
Into their lesser nature
As the emptiest of passions
Reflects what I deem my cadaver,
Ah, yet alive!

Yes, I would be whole
If I were to be even an immaterial part
For you, I bow
But providence
Overcomes my limbs

My deviant thought
Tortures, confronts
My hidden avarice
Abreast a delusion
Of my captive desire
Ah, but this greed
Is for the ethereal

This selfish orb redeemed
If only your soul justifies
What my heart conspires
Only then. Yes! Only then…

[XxgoeyxX]

"O my heart "


O my heart that I have from my father
O my heart that I have from my father
O my heart of my different ages
Do not stand up as a witness against me.
Do not burden me with hatred and fear.
Do not hostile me in my time of darkness.

For you are my soul.
You are the protector of my breath,
The protector, which have helped my lovers hale.

Let my body go forth.
But do not stop me from loving,
do not stop me from tasting truth.
Do not tell lies in the presence of God.

O my heart that I have from my father
O my heart that I have from my father
O my heart who will guide me through my ages.
For you are my soul.
Do not commit sins against me, for I have sinned in my life for you.
Do not judge me by your words, for I have judged you for your love.
Your deeds are righteous for no sin can be found in you.

Your utterance to leave me is true.
But my sins are no long your burden, for I have no more sin against you.

O my heart that I have from my father
O my heart that I have from my father
O my heart give me will to go through my life.
I plead you to give me peace so that my body can be healed
and my thoughts can be blissful and pure.

O my heart that I have from my father
Let you live long in my body.
Let you not leave me.
O my heart guide me through all the ages which I will live.
For I will not let a single soul entering your doors forget you and your love.

[SagGal]

Wonderful poems you guys. Very very nice.
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Drove - Burned, by Narine

I didn't see him but he danced the night away
I didn't see him but it was that same day
When he got in the car and drove from there
To where the screams are hard to hear.

He had a love and soon a ring on his finger
He didn't know that death would slowly linger
To his side when he was there alone
As he got in the car and drove.

He left to put a bigger smile on everyone's faces.
At that point his act did not look at all dangerous
Maybe what got him in trouble was their carelessness
But why did everything have to go up in flames?

To continue dancing and not to have a single care is why he drove
To bring back something everyone would really love
So that they'd eat and dance the next night away
But instead they cried their son "Goodbye."

From USA to Armenia and Russia, tears were shed
A phonecall from his sister saying, "Vadim nash zgarel!"
When he was a baby he burned himself badly
Same thing happened that day...except this time it was deadly.



P.S. In Russian, "Vadim nash zgarel" means, "Our Vadim was burned."

[HyeJinx1984]

Yea, I just got up this morning and wrote it. I don't know where it came from, lol.