Poetry Corner

[HyeJinx1984]

Alright, alright... since you asked:

Sex with Toys,
Sex with Boys,
Sex with Dogs,
Sex with Hogs,
Sex with Candy and Sex with Sandy
Sex in the kitchen can be b!tchin'
When having Sex on the floor,
Sex is every man's favorite chore!

*Takes a bow*

[angelik22]

hehe funny, when i was in high school pple thought i was weird because i wrote alotta poetry... damn high school teenage peoples
poetry kiks bootey- hey jinx i should send you the new ones ive scrambled up lately haha- u have any new ones?

[HyeJinx1984]

armo thugs suck ass... Hye Thugs(tm) on the other hand KICK ass

[SxyDon]

ill try a different approach next time im in the mood of doing this.

[angelik22]

yea i also like that one good one baron i totally agree too- and u got a good way with words ~there was a time when poetry used to be my life- but recently i feel like that part of me is dying off and i dont like it at all- i wish i could write liek i used to- i think my brian is fried!

[Margi]

ok ok, i'll give it a shot...this is a poem i call...

The Armo thugs

You can hear them coming,
their modified civics are humming.
ludacris music is blaring,
and just what the hell are they wearing?
with 5 pounds of fake gold around their neck,
they try to hide that their life's a wreck.
bragging about the price of their fubu coats,
they haven't even heard the name of Mesrob Mashdots.
they might call you a homie or bro
and will compliment you on your new afro.
sadly enough, they still call themselves armos,
and down the drain our reputation goes...

hmm, nothing too special, I gave it a shot though...

THis is sooo true.

[SagGal]

As I sit here
And think to myself
Do you think of me?
Do you still want me?
Do you still love me?
It burns me inside to think you’re with someone else
It burns me inside to just think you’re not mine
I look around me
Trying to find how to get these feelings
How to get these thoughts out of my mind
I feel so lonely
I feel so depressed
Without you I feel empty
What can I do to reverse time?
To undo the things that got me feeling and thinking this way
Tell me
Do you still think of me?

Nice.

I kind of like poems like this because it is simple (not the feelings I'm sure) and right to the point. Very straighforward.

[XxgoeyxX]

You have a lot of potential. I think if you just expressed a little more it would be a nice poem. Everyone feels what you wrote, but I'm sure you have more feelings about this subject. Thats what I try to do with my poems. Even though they sux half the time.

[Anonymouse]

What's the point of this poem? Why is it in General Armenian Talk? This belongs in the Poetry Corner. Why don't you newbies browse the site and use some COMMON SENSE before posting your stuff?

By the way, your poem was generic. Just my two cents.

[SxyDon]

Its what i felt

Its what i was feeling and it kinda helped by being able to share it with others in this fashion.