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  • spiral
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    Here's an old one.

    Pact With The Devil

    What about him is so appealing to thine eye,
    that raps around our bodies holding tight
    and swindles our soul into a lie,
    Pulling us towards him, away from the light?...

    We take comfort in its discourse
    that lifts all burdens off of our shoulders
    leaving us to feel no remorse
    over sins and appalling actions we take towards others.

    It's hypnotic voice, fills our mind
    whirling, swirling, into such convincing shapes
    until we are left blind,
    drowning in the devil's gapes.













    Yes, I know about thine

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  • Anonymouse
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    Forgiveness

    I have been bad since a lad
    In a dreamy Armenian homeland of the past
    Tearing the curtain to satisfy the want
    Putting a match in the outlet
    Burning down the curtains
    Electrocuting myself
    As a child causing havoc for my parents
    Who art so patient
    My dear brother
    I am sorry, for scratching you
    We’ve spent a lifetime circling each other
    On the canvas in the paints shadow
    I have not listened wisely
    I have been bad so bad
    My mind made of sand slipping thought and action
    Into my self made fiction of lost convictions
    As I grew in size my mind ceased to be wise
    I have instead taken strides in latitudes of lies
    Thinking I was escaping my
    Hemispheres of fears
    I don’t remember too much of anything
    Of these voyages into the seas of nothing
    Only after did I remember
    Anything I could have hoped to say
    Where did thy mind go prancing far
    And off and low
    Shedding tears it could not fake
    For ages passed it formed a lake
    No, wit doesn’t matter
    This is my imperfection
    This is my soul’s transmutation
    I never intended it to lead to this
    It took some years and few bruises to notice
    That I was lying in dirt
    Soiled I sit, my jeans still fit
    With my eyes outlining the veins that ride my skin
    In silence the blood flowing
    Following a path toward my heart
    A train of peaceful punctures
    Riding merrily down in a timeless exercise
    Of what once was the arm, beginning of my name
    Which I used to swim in the seas of nothing
    Because I was so bad living for myself
    Walking heedless paths into diversion
    Never thought of reconnection
    To my soul, my driving force
    And thy brain all lost and weary
    Could not find a path that’s worthy
    And here is where I
    Sigh...
    Sit, lost in a lie
    Clenched tight and I
    Couldn’t console myself because I needed the family
    My family
    And now I know not to bring for more misery
    Tonight I offer this apology
    Please forgive me, dear family
    That watered my roots with your eternal eyes
    Healed my hearts wounds with your silky smiles
    Altered my blood flow to change my heart beat
    Acted as my inner ammo to keep my soul sweet
    And this is my biography
    Of apology
    Of the lengths that I have gone to
    To escape me

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  • XxgoeyxX
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    Okay...so here is one of mine........


    In this life, this hole we bleed and breathe
    Next door we’ve have been cursed to be
    In this life I have never been known to understand happiness.
    I have never known, so to have never been forgotten.

    Now and here you laugh and leap as a five-year-old child, with no cares to keep.
    But you have never been in this world.
    You have not seen my family weep.
    My world my culture raises and dies and you laugh and leap as the five-year-old child.

    In this life, this hole we live and breed.
    Next door you’re have cursed to be
    But is this my life my own.
    To which I should find happiness
    To which I shell never truly been known.

    Built on only chance this life we choose to live, to take.
    But next door I have been cursed to die, in this life, this hole of mine, which I have laughed and cried.

    This path I walk, this one here, let me bravely tread when you will only fear.
    Cause all you do it laugh and leap as the five-year-old child with no cares to keep.

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  • angelik22
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    eek i have so many new ones but theyre too personal to post them- im so hesitant abotu posting my poems here...

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  • Anonymouse
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    It's been a while since someone wrote a poem.

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  • SagGal
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    OUCH! I have a feeling he might not "...do some more." lol.

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  • spiral
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    I don't like it.

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  • MadHandle
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    This might be a diffrent format...I got some spare time though, I'll give it a try. Its not gonna be poetry though...more of a hiphop type flow.


    You don't understand...I got more rhymes then a hand full of sand
    Verbal terms tryin to Expand...I can't hold my "heavy" rhymes hand in hand
    This is not poetry...Nursery Rhyming to me Is like an Ancient Study
    You can't can't "outbeat" me, it be Like tryin to "Suck" on A latex Candy
    Im tryin to kick knowlege...Maybe Some of Ya'll Smart Enough to Acknowledge
    Some say its hard to rhyme "Orange"...Here you go man, Its not a Challenge
    Look, I can go on and on, maybe rhmye this till the Brake of Dawn
    4 Am, And I'm still jumpin bars like a Rook Over Pawn, or the Hook on this Line

    This took me about 5-10 minutes. Give feeback on it, I mgiht do some more.
    Last edited by MadHandle; 08-07-2004, 12:25 AM.

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  • angelik22
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    Years

    Please don’t come and leave once again,
    For I haven’t had the chance to begin.
    You come so hastily and with such grace
    But take along only time without a pace.
    All that remains from you are lines,
    Imprinted as wrinkles upon my face
    Burned in as images in photographs
    Spilled upon like ink on a writer’s first draft
    Instilled as deep grooves into my heart
    And captured as a smile, a kiss in my memories.
    Precious are these, the feelings, the glee
    The memories that are treasures, so dear to me.
    Yet you decide to revisit once more,
    Completing your mission, your frivolous chore.
    But this time more ruthless than ever before.
    Endowing more pain, taking what’s left
    My soul filled with treasures, before your theft.
    Taking all, you leave one last breath,
    Which I take in, knowing I have nothing else left…

    By: Me again

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  • Anonymouse
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    Originally posted by ckBejug
    Word weaver words.

    Spin your fantasies around me word weaver.
    Seduce my mind with a subtle rhyme.
    Tangle me in twists and turns on each page,
    To lure my heart into your space and time.

    For words hold the key to unlock my soul.
    To unfetter my spirit and set it flying free.
    Reveal your thoughts upon the naked page,
    And through their spell, entice me, capture me.
    Very good poem. Nice use of words.

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