Poetry Corner

[surferarmo]

Iraq

The war is over
The emotions are not
Of fighting, there is a lot.
Free people defend a devil man
Whom puts his people in a can
Wraps them tight, and wont let them free
Until America came, and let it be.

This issue creates much discussion
Surferarmo's disagreement has had reprecussion
Cant you see another view
NO: you are lazy, sitting on the pew
From Canada to France afar
You defend this Russian Czar
Bush gets more hatred than Saddam
Why should I not drop the bomb?

Do not be afraid of my posts
If you cant respond I will only bost
A lecture on globalization
and the protest with conflation
Unexamined lives are not worth living
Is life just for care and giving?
Evasive action works for my side
You can run, but you cant hide.


*This is my first poem, and I must say, it really does take away some of the stress from finals.

[surferarmo]

I dont think I am that good at poetry, but I actually am starting to like it. Oh well, I want to see more of your poetry. Lets see it people.

[Anonymouse]

Iraq

The war is over
The emotions are not
Of fighting, there is a lot.
Free people defend a devil man
Whom puts his people in a can
Wraps them tight, and wont let them free
Until America came, and let it be.

This issue creates much discussion
Surferarmo's disagreement has had reprecussion
Cant you see another view
NO: you are lazy, sitting on the pew
From Canada to France afar
You defend this Russian Czar
Bush gets more hatred than Saddam
Why should I not drop the bomb?

Do not be afraid of my posts
If you cant respond I will only bost
A lecture on globalization
and the protest with conflation
Unexamined lives are not worth living
Is life just for care and giving?
Evasive action works for my side
You can run, but you cant hide.


*This is my first poem, and I must say, it really does take away some of the stress from finals.

Oh how lovely, made my nipples hard.

[surferarmo]

Iraq

The war is over
The emotions are not
Of fighting, there is a lot.
Free people defend a devil man
Whom puts his people in a can
Wraps them tight, and wont let them free
Until America came, and let it be.

This issue creates much discussion
Surferarmo's disagreement has had reprecussion
Cant you see another view
NO: you are lazy, sitting on the pew
From Canada to France afar
You defend this Russian Czar
Bush gets more hatred than Saddam
Why should I not drop the bomb?

Do not be afraid of my posts
If you cant respond I will only bost
A lecture on globalization
and the protest with conflation
Unexamined lives are not worth living
Is life just for care and giving?
Evasive action works for my side
You can run, but you cant hide.


*This is my first poem, and I must say, it really does take away some of the stress from finals.

Oh how lovely, made my nipples hard.

LOL. HAHAHAHA, I tried didnt I. I am glad to see my poems have such an affect. I just wish it happened to girls instead of guys.

[jahannam]

surfer... the potential's there...
language and measurements wise... not bad at all
you just need to work on the whole topic and ingredients thing...
good start though
:twisted: :twisted:

[fIReBuRntInHeLL]

Iraq

The war is over
The emotions are not
Of fighting, there is a lot.
Free people defend a devil man
Whom puts his people in a can
Wraps them tight, and wont let them free
Until America came, and let it be.

This issue creates much discussion
Surferarmo's disagreement has had reprecussion
Cant you see another view
NO: you are lazy, sitting on the pew
From Canada to France afar
You defend this Russian Czar
Bush gets more hatred than Saddam
Why should I not drop the bomb?

Do not be afraid of my posts
If you cant respond I will only bost
A lecture on globalization
and the protest with conflation
Unexamined lives are not worth living
Is life just for care and giving?
Evasive action works for my side
You can run, but you cant hide.


*This is my first poem, and I must say, it really does take away some of the stress from finals.

Oh how lovely, made my nipples hard.

brillian comment :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

[xBaron Dants]

Iraq

The war is over
The emotions are not
Of fighting, there is a lot.
Free people defend a devil man
Whom puts his people in a can
Wraps them tight, and wont let them free
Until America came, and let it be.

This issue creates much discussion
Surferarmo's disagreement has had reprecussion
Cant you see another view
NO: you are lazy, sitting on the pew
From Canada to France afar
You defend this Russian Czar
Bush gets more hatred than Saddam
Why should I not drop the bomb?

Do not be afraid of my posts
If you cant respond I will only bost
A lecture on globalization
and the protest with conflation
Unexamined lives are not worth living
Is life just for care and giving?
Evasive action works for my side
You can run, but you cant hide.


*This is my first poem, and I must say, it really does take away some of the stress from finals.

Iraq 2

Although surferarmo does call us pussies
since we don't enjoy the death of Irakis,
He isn't to blame for being one-sided,
Because by FOX news, he's been blinded.
Despite his bias, he continues his mission
To one day be a good politician.
He has potential to be a good bureaucrat
because the lives of many, for him, mean squat.
As long as it means profit for the states
muslims and arabs, with a passion, he hates.

But be reassured, fellow lovers of peace
For comeback will come when Bush will decease.
Although he now rejoices in his new-found oil
he will then be in hell, where he will eternally boil.

[jahannam]

Dants... will you marry me?
8) 8) 8)

[xBaron Dants]

Dants... will you marry me?
8) 8) 8)

I thought you'd never ask!

or was that my job.....? :?

[xBaron Dants]

This one's for you jahannam

The Halebtsis

From the "hard-knock" streets of Soulemenyé, we come
Always witty and never dumb.
At Photo Anto or Sako, we have all taken pictures
And drank bubble-up from bottles and pitchers.
Whether it was at HO PEN or HO MEN - ET MEN
We were always surrounded by loud, hilarious men.
Let's admit, sometimes the streets would smell,
But these people knew how to make food, anyone will tell.

Although there was censorship with Hafez al-Assad,
On the day of his death, we were all a little sad.
We also learned there that arabs are nice people
And they're not, as many would suggest, pure evil.