Sweatshops

[patlajan]

You could always plagiarize what is already in this thread. I'm sure your professor won't find out.

The guy/girl is asking for help in English not your brilliant opinion on the issue. There’s nothing in this thread worth plagiarizing.

BabyLouu after you’re done paste your paper in here and we’ll proof-read it for you.

[loseyourname]

Indeed. I see what you mean. Sorry for being stupid.

[Anonymouse]

Hello Iam from Germany and Iam going to write my A-Level in English next Monday.We must write a comment(about 500 words) about "How do you think about sweatshops and what do you think should be done to change the situation in these sweatshops"?
Can you help me with this please?Iam not very good in english :-(
That would be very nice...

by chrissie

Please read my posts in this thread regarding the sweat shops to present the "other side".

[BabyLouu]

The problem is that iam not very good in english and i do not know anything about these sweatshops.so it would be very nice if anybody could write me such a comment(about 500 words), because i need a good mark in english.
what do you think about these sweatshops and what can be done to change the situation in these sweatshops?

by chrissie

[Tres Bien]

You go to english lessons to learn!! Borrow a English- German word book, do some reasearch, there are resorces on the internet , im sure, about sweatshops and form your own opinion in the matter.
Nevertheless.....its wrong to put children in work where they can get all kinds of psysical and psyological damage for beeing forced to work in un-healthy enviroments.

[Inna]

The problem is that iam not very good in english and i do not know anything about these sweatshops.so it would be very nice if anybody could write me such a comment(about 500 words), because i need a good mark in english.
what do you think about these sweatshops and what can be done to change the situation in these sweatshops?

by chrissie

I know your frustrated..having to write something on a topic that you are not familiar with and on top of that writing it in a language you aren't good at...it can be hard..just try to do some research on sweatshops, the positives and negatives of it, and write it in German...once you've completed it..try doing your best on translating the paper into English. Then post your paper (English version) on here and we would be more than happy to correct any spelling or grammer for you.

[BabyLouu]

Yes that's right Iam very frustrated, because Iam searching in the internet all the time for this topic but I can`t find anything what I can put into my comment and I do not have much time.
Can everybody write me such a short comment about sweatshops and child labour?It is my last english test on monday than I do not have this subject any longer :-)
You know so much about this topic and your english is so good, you would help me very much...

[Inna]

As much as I would like to help you I can't write the paper for you...and I doubt anyone else here will write it for you. The internet is filled with information, just go to www.google.com and type in sweatshops and you will get a list of information about it.
Here are some sites that I found:

http://www.uniteunion.org/sweatshops/whatis/whatis.html

http://www.pbs.org/newshour/bb/business/jan-june97/sweatshops_4-14.html

and this is a whole list of sites from google, although a lot of them are bias and only offer the drawbacks of sweatshops:

http://www.google.com/search?hl=en&lr=&ie=UTF-8&oe=UTF-8&q=sweatshops

I advise you to actually read these sites, don't just copy and paste, because trust me your teacher will know if you wrote it or not...and 500 words is not that much, just read the information on sweatshops, form your own opinion, and use the evidence from these sites to back your statements up..you'll be done in no time...Good luck.

[BabyLouu]

I have already look by google for information but my problem is that I can`t form a comment from this information.
The language in this papers is to difficult for me.Is really nobody here who can write me such an statement?
Please help me

[Tres Bien]

bablou, your not a baby anymore ru going to school to learn english. You haev to learn sometime how to write essays. If you need help read what we have written about sweatshops before in this thread! Get some background information, a few facts about sweatshops as for in wich countries they exist, to what extent, who owns these companies. http://www.globalmarch.org/worstform...hildlabour.htm

http://www.senser.com/4-8.htm